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Post by Dragon Yoshi on Jul 16, 2009 21:10:46 GMT -5
Still really good. (But now i'm gonna critizise you) you might want to be more descriptive when they touched the tablets and the marking appear
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Post by Daniel Tak on Jul 16, 2009 21:25:09 GMT -5
It was nice to have the monks play a role here. Thanks for updating!  As usual, I will be eager to read any future updates. |
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Post by Scarecrow on Jul 17, 2009 11:51:57 GMT -5
oh no, I've just been CRITICIZED
Mostly, It was taking too long and I was doing something else and the chapter was already as long as two others put together.
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Post by Daniel Tak on Jul 17, 2009 19:05:38 GMT -5
Starting with the next chapter, I will hopefully be more critical. Be prepared. |
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Post by Scarecrow on Aug 15, 2009 9:27:09 GMT -5
I've been feeling some writer's block on this story, so I'm pretty much going to forget about it for a few weeks or so. maybe then I'll remember what I planned to do with chapter 6.
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Post by Raging Rachel on Sept 18, 2009 1:32:57 GMT -5
It's good, just a bit to fantasical for me.
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