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Post by Dragon Yoshi on Apr 20, 2009 20:24:24 GMT -5
Well my English teacher had us write a sonnet and here it is
Where the Eagle Soars is where freedom reigns
With wings like an eagle I soar up high The wind under my wings flow freely past Falling at times as I pass the world by The first thing I see can sometimes be the last Nothing to keep me away from the world Everything can be seen if it’s my dream People wish they could leave their binds like me I look to the land the landscape serene If I can do no more let me fly free If I can’t fly free there is no me I don’t need much I simply need a tree While high in the sky I truly have glee My life won’t end so long as I can fly I hope some day you will give it a try
Sorry about the flood of writing pieces today I've just got a lot to add.
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Post by Scarecrow on Apr 21, 2009 17:08:37 GMT -5
hope you don't mind a few corrections(I'm a bit of a spelling/grammer nazi)
they're spelled SOARS, REIGNS and SERENE.
other than that though, it's good! really inspirational.
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Post by Dragon Yoshi on Apr 23, 2009 16:06:53 GMT -5
Bhhhh COPS is not my strong point
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Post by Daniel Tak on Apr 24, 2009 16:33:46 GMT -5
Good job, I'm not much of a sonnet writer myself so this is better than what I would come up if I attempted to do so. (Added to writer's directory.) PS: Dark Boy Sabata is right, check your spelling. I fixed some of those in your post.
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