Post by Ezio on Mar 27, 2009 23:54:43 GMT -5
Henry Wilson lived with his parents in a small town in the Rocky Mountains. Henry liked to hang out with his friends Edmund, Puck, Jacques and Ricardo. They liked to play video games, soccer, and basketball.
One day while Henry and his friends were out playing, a big black car was sneaking to Henry’s house. Inside the car there was a group of criminals called the Shake and Bakes. The leader of the Shake and Bakes was called Gumbo Gutman. Gumbo was as fat as a pig and was mean as a junkyard dog. Gumbo wanted to kidnap Henry’s parents because they got him arrested. Gumbo and his gang snuck into Henry’s house and looked for Henry’s parents. When Gumbo and his gang found them they put bags on their heads so they couldn’t see. Then they left a ransom note on the bed. It said that they wanted $101,001.01 delivered in 3 weeks to their base in Mount Elbert or Henry’s parents would die. They then went back to their hideout.
When Henry and his friends came in after they finished playing they couldn’t find Henry’s parents. Then Henry noticed a note on the bed. He read the note. His parents had been kidnapped!
Henry was really scared. His parents had told him about Gumbo and what an evil person he was. They had also said that they would keep Henry safe from Gumbo. Now Gumbo had kidnapped his parents, and Henry was all alone.
“My parents have been kidnapped!” Henry said.
After he showed his friends the note, they said that they would help him. This made Henry realize that he wasn’t alone and that he and his friends would find a way to save his parents.
They all decided that they would sneak into Gumbo’s hideout. They would borrow Ricardo’s private helicopter to get to Gumbo’s base in Mount Elbert. Ricardo has a helicopter because his family is rich. Then they would try to find Henry’s parents. Once they did they would tell the FBI where Gumbo was. They planned to leave the next morning, so that night they packed warm clothes, flashlights, drinks, food, and any other things that might be useful.
“Let’s meet at Ricardo’s house tomorrow morning,” said Jacques.
The next morning they met in front of Ricardo’s house. They then started the flight to Mount Elbert. They decided to land on the closest mountain so that Gumbo couldn’t hear the helicopter. By the time they arrived there it was 7:00pm. When they landed on the mountain it was as cold as an ice cube in the Arctic.
“Two weeks and six days,” Henry thought.
When they saw the base of Mount Elbert they were amazed. It looked like it had the highest security in the world. Lots of the stuff looked advanced. Ricardo saw motion sensor bombs and heat seeking missiles. Henry started to feel scared again. How would they ever get inside the base?
Suddenly Ricardo said, “I have a plan!”
They split up into three groups. Henry went with Puck. Jacques went with Edmund and Ricardo went by himself. He went alone because he was the smartest and both his grandparents were spies, so he was very crafty.
Henry and Puck decided to use a special gun that Ricardo gave them. He said that no one could hear or see the bullet. They took out all the cameras with it. Next they had to create a diversion so that they could get inside. They made a bomb sound from the left of the guards by using a computer. All the guards ran to the noise. That is when Henry and Puck went inside the base. Inside the base the security was much tighter than outside. They were very careful to not trip any traps and to make sure that they weren’t caught on camera. When they got to a room they saw that Ricardo, Edmund, and Jacques had already made it.
Once they were inside the building, Henry was worried again. It was a big building and his parents could be anywhere inside. He decided that they would need to search everywhere, and that he and his friends should stick together. They then went together to find Henry’s parents. They started from the bottom and worked their way to the top. There were 5 floors to the base. They looked through the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd floors with no problem. On the 4th floor there were many more traps and lots more guards. Henry took out the cameras with the gun he had used earlier. Ricardo took out all of the guards by using his invisibility cloak and using his martial art skills.
On the 5th floor they saw Henry’s parents. They were asleep in a cage that was hanging from a rope, which was above a pot of acid.
“We have to save my parents,” said Henry.
To get Henry’s parents out of the cage they moved the pot of acid. Next Ricardo picked the lock. Once the locked was picked they took Henry’s parents out of the cage and woke them up. That is when an alarm went off.
What Henry, Puck, Ricardo, Edmund, and Jacques didn’t know was that there was a motion sensor alarm and as soon as they took Henry’s parents out of the cage the alarm went off. The alarm sounded as if the base exploded.
They had to get out as fast as possible. They decided to get Henry’s parents to safety first. So Ricardo gave Henry’s parents the invisibility cloak so that they could escape. Once they left, Henry and his friends went out the back way. When they were going down the stairs they could hear Gumbo’s men chasing them. They got down to the first floor and they almost got out when they saw Gumbo blocking the entrance.
Gumbo and his men now surrounded them. Just when they were about to be captured Ricardo used a smoke bomb. Now was their chance to escape! They all ran toward the helicopter as fast as a cheetah. They made it and the helicopter took off. Once they were in the helicopter. Puck called the FBI and told them where Gumbo’s hideout was. The FBI said they would go there right away. The day after they got back they heard that Gumbo and his gang got arrested and were going to be sent to a classified location. Henry was very happy because he had his parents back, and he realized that even though he had been really scared, he and his friends could do anything as long as they stuck together.
This is another thing I wrote 4 English.
plz r and r
Ja Ne
Mongoose
One day while Henry and his friends were out playing, a big black car was sneaking to Henry’s house. Inside the car there was a group of criminals called the Shake and Bakes. The leader of the Shake and Bakes was called Gumbo Gutman. Gumbo was as fat as a pig and was mean as a junkyard dog. Gumbo wanted to kidnap Henry’s parents because they got him arrested. Gumbo and his gang snuck into Henry’s house and looked for Henry’s parents. When Gumbo and his gang found them they put bags on their heads so they couldn’t see. Then they left a ransom note on the bed. It said that they wanted $101,001.01 delivered in 3 weeks to their base in Mount Elbert or Henry’s parents would die. They then went back to their hideout.
When Henry and his friends came in after they finished playing they couldn’t find Henry’s parents. Then Henry noticed a note on the bed. He read the note. His parents had been kidnapped!
Henry was really scared. His parents had told him about Gumbo and what an evil person he was. They had also said that they would keep Henry safe from Gumbo. Now Gumbo had kidnapped his parents, and Henry was all alone.
“My parents have been kidnapped!” Henry said.
After he showed his friends the note, they said that they would help him. This made Henry realize that he wasn’t alone and that he and his friends would find a way to save his parents.
They all decided that they would sneak into Gumbo’s hideout. They would borrow Ricardo’s private helicopter to get to Gumbo’s base in Mount Elbert. Ricardo has a helicopter because his family is rich. Then they would try to find Henry’s parents. Once they did they would tell the FBI where Gumbo was. They planned to leave the next morning, so that night they packed warm clothes, flashlights, drinks, food, and any other things that might be useful.
“Let’s meet at Ricardo’s house tomorrow morning,” said Jacques.
The next morning they met in front of Ricardo’s house. They then started the flight to Mount Elbert. They decided to land on the closest mountain so that Gumbo couldn’t hear the helicopter. By the time they arrived there it was 7:00pm. When they landed on the mountain it was as cold as an ice cube in the Arctic.
“Two weeks and six days,” Henry thought.
When they saw the base of Mount Elbert they were amazed. It looked like it had the highest security in the world. Lots of the stuff looked advanced. Ricardo saw motion sensor bombs and heat seeking missiles. Henry started to feel scared again. How would they ever get inside the base?
Suddenly Ricardo said, “I have a plan!”
They split up into three groups. Henry went with Puck. Jacques went with Edmund and Ricardo went by himself. He went alone because he was the smartest and both his grandparents were spies, so he was very crafty.
Henry and Puck decided to use a special gun that Ricardo gave them. He said that no one could hear or see the bullet. They took out all the cameras with it. Next they had to create a diversion so that they could get inside. They made a bomb sound from the left of the guards by using a computer. All the guards ran to the noise. That is when Henry and Puck went inside the base. Inside the base the security was much tighter than outside. They were very careful to not trip any traps and to make sure that they weren’t caught on camera. When they got to a room they saw that Ricardo, Edmund, and Jacques had already made it.
Once they were inside the building, Henry was worried again. It was a big building and his parents could be anywhere inside. He decided that they would need to search everywhere, and that he and his friends should stick together. They then went together to find Henry’s parents. They started from the bottom and worked their way to the top. There were 5 floors to the base. They looked through the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd floors with no problem. On the 4th floor there were many more traps and lots more guards. Henry took out the cameras with the gun he had used earlier. Ricardo took out all of the guards by using his invisibility cloak and using his martial art skills.
On the 5th floor they saw Henry’s parents. They were asleep in a cage that was hanging from a rope, which was above a pot of acid.
“We have to save my parents,” said Henry.
To get Henry’s parents out of the cage they moved the pot of acid. Next Ricardo picked the lock. Once the locked was picked they took Henry’s parents out of the cage and woke them up. That is when an alarm went off.
What Henry, Puck, Ricardo, Edmund, and Jacques didn’t know was that there was a motion sensor alarm and as soon as they took Henry’s parents out of the cage the alarm went off. The alarm sounded as if the base exploded.
They had to get out as fast as possible. They decided to get Henry’s parents to safety first. So Ricardo gave Henry’s parents the invisibility cloak so that they could escape. Once they left, Henry and his friends went out the back way. When they were going down the stairs they could hear Gumbo’s men chasing them. They got down to the first floor and they almost got out when they saw Gumbo blocking the entrance.
Gumbo and his men now surrounded them. Just when they were about to be captured Ricardo used a smoke bomb. Now was their chance to escape! They all ran toward the helicopter as fast as a cheetah. They made it and the helicopter took off. Once they were in the helicopter. Puck called the FBI and told them where Gumbo’s hideout was. The FBI said they would go there right away. The day after they got back they heard that Gumbo and his gang got arrested and were going to be sent to a classified location. Henry was very happy because he had his parents back, and he realized that even though he had been really scared, he and his friends could do anything as long as they stuck together.
This is another thing I wrote 4 English.
plz r and r
Ja Ne
Mongoose